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Dancing with Fansby ~CantPickaName735

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I see you.
You, and all your lies.
I dance and whirl,
Losing my ties to the world.
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A good friend of mine, Dakota. She is a wonderful model to work with. :) Taken with a 35mm film olympus camera, developed in the darkroom.
I love black and white.

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©2012-2013 ~CantPickaName735
Category: Photography / Darkroom / Traditional / Traditional Processes

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Critique by ~SketchedExistence Jan 22, 2013, 6:23:40 PM
I think this is a really balanced composition. I like the sharp focus on the fabric across her shoulder and on the bottom fan and the neat shadow created by the upper fan. The way you've cropped in creates a vibe of intrigue. She could be just dancing, but there is also a sense of obscurement.

The only constructive criticism I can think of is that maybe the deepest blacks in the image could have gone even darker. I'm not sure if that would have pushed other areas too far or if you need to switch to a different filter. I think just that little bit more would push this just that right amount.
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~cardcaptor-eternity Mar 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
looks great!! i'm in a level 1 photography class and we're learning how to develop 35mm black and white film =) its fun!
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~CantPickaName735 Mar 9, 2013  Student General Artist
If you stick with it, you'll really discover how fun it can be. The darkroom is one of my favorite places in the world.
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~cardcaptor-eternity Mar 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awesome!! i wish i could, but i'm graduating in may ;__; my college is the only access to a darkroom that i have (makes me kinda sad!)
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~CantPickaName735 Mar 9, 2013  Student General Artist
D: I'm kinda dreading when I leave school too, for the same reason.
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~cardcaptor-eternity Mar 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
D: :glomp:
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*Remember2Live Feb 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This is a great portrait! I love the composition and the play with the lines of shadow. It's really easy to take a picture of a pretty girl and have people fawn over it, but this is more than just a picture of a pretty girl, it speaks of fore-thought and skill of the artist behind the camera. Well done :clap:
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~CantPickaName735 Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for your kindness! C:
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~rainycloudywindy Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful shot! I love the way the fans frame it. =)
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~CantPickaName735 Feb 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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~Julie-de-Waroquier Feb 17, 2013  Professional Photographer
Featured :aww: :heart: [link]
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